The use of dissonance is a bit strange, so it might need some fixing up. The mixing is pretty good, and I can feel the beat! So, you did get the riser, but you should try some extra things with it to make it sound cooler (repeating half your main melody, a slide note, changing the pitch and etc.). I think that this is a good foundation for making more music :D
I get what you're saying about the riser, it sounds like a better idea. I was way too happy about me making the sounds myself because usually I don't make the best sounds on my own, I'll keep it in mind later.
Thanks for the review! I'll continue to try my best.
~Alpha
I really liked your main melody, which sounds VERY professional! :P Your vocals were awesome and fit in with the song! I just recommend you work in the intro a bit, because it felt a bit dry (more reverb???). Other than that, I think that this is song was great, and deserves more exposure! :D
Thank you very much! I will take that into consideration when I redo the singing. Gonna fiddle around a bit more with reverb and extend the intro a bit. Thank you again! ^^
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Age 23, Male
Canada
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